Period 1 Whole Group:
- Receive "Formula for an Introduction" and "Formula for a Conclusion"
- New Order for Blog Commenting
- Introduction Review - Two different Examples
Period 1 On Your Own:
- Continue Drafting Your Opinion Essay
- Create Blog Comment
- Conference with Mr. Jeffers when you are finished working.
- Only after you're finished, you must begin watching wiki tutorials at the following page: www.mrcoreyjeffers.wikispaces.com/wikitutorials
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Introduction Review
Find the following in the two introductions below:
- Grabber Statement
- Explanation of Grabber
- Thesis Statement
Which of these introductions is more effective and why? (Two extra credit points will be awarded for responding to this post). Please label each part (grabber, explanation, and thesis) in your comment by copying and pasting each part in the comment box.
Introduction Sample #1:
School is boring. That’s why we should change it. There are many things that could be changed about school such as where our lockers are, what food we eat, and how long our classes run.
Introduction Sample #2:
Out of a survey of 400,000 students, 47 percent of them think school is boring. This means that nearly half of school students are bored for over half of the hours they are awake each week (Pearson, 2006). It’s time for schools to make a change. There are many things that could be changed about school such as the location, and size of our lockers, and choosing our locker neighbors. In addition, the nutritional value, the options, and length of our lunches should be changed as well as the students’ choices in their schedules, teachers, and the classes they take.